Kate's Poem

What do you see, nurses,what do you see?
What are you thinking when you look at me?
A crabby old woman, not very wise,
Uncertain of habit with far away eyes
Who dribbles her food and makes no reply
When you say in a loud voice "i do wish you'd try".
And forever is losing a stick or a shoe
Who unresisting or not lets you do as you will,
With bathing and feeding - the long day to fill.
Is that what you're thinking? Is that what you see?
Then open your eyes nurse - you're looking at me.
I'll tell you who i am as i sit here so still
As i move at your bidding, as i eat at your will.
I'm a small child of ten with a father and mother,
Brothers and sisters who love one another.
A young girl of sixteen with wings on her feet,
Dreaming that soon a lover she'll meet.
A bride soon, at twenty my heart gives a leap
Remembering the vows that i promised to keep.
At twenty-five now i have young of my own
Who need me to build a secure happy home.
A young woman of thirty my young now grow fast
Bound to each other with ties that should last.
At forty my young ones now grown will be gone
But my memory stays beside me to see i don't mourn.
At fifty, once more babies play round my knee
Again, we know children my loved one and me.
Dark days are upon me: my husband is dead
I look at the future, i shudder with dread.
For my young are all busy rearing young of their own
And i think of the years and the love i have known.
I'm an old woman now and nature is cruel
The body it crumbles, grace and vigour depart
There now is a stone where i once had a heart.
But inside this old carcass a young girl still dwells
And now and again my battered heart swells
I remember the joys, i remember the pain
And i'm loving ond living life over again
I think of the years - all too few - gone too fast
And accept the stark fact that nothing can last
So open your eyes, nurses, open and see
Not a crabby old woman.....look closer,see ME.

what a great poem. i think its cool.

[pete8242]

omfg
that was beautifull

[sky]

That indeed was lovely and thought provoking.

I've heard that one before bebe.And workingwhere i do it really made stop and think.It is a lovely and very true poem ty for posting it.

i,ve just read ur poem, and i think its the most beautiful piece i,ve ever read, it brought tears to my eyes, ty.

We will all be in some sort of this state. May our future generations be kind and understanding for they will be caring for us and teaching the next generation. They will want kindness then and their furture generations will test the time.