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Old 21-04-08, 09:35 PM
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Wink locked up inside by bryan k9

Whenever I try to write about
The feelings I have for you
My heart simply slams the door
To hide them all from view

It doesn't want to share at all
Emotions beating strong
It wants to keep them selfishly
Inside where they belong

Afraid to be misunderstood
By some that do not know
The feelings that we really share
Run as deep as they can go

Deep and true as any love
But ours is so unique
Friendship and yet so much more
Of this I cannot speak

I cannot allow myself to think
About the many "what ifs"
Wondering about what might be
Will lead me to that cliff

I'll stand there at the very brink
And peer down from above
And when I see that peaceful scene
I just might fall in love




i am passionate about poems and have written loads lots more from me to come ppl.
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Old 23-04-08, 06:18 PM
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Like that bry,it's really good.
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Old 23-04-08, 07:27 PM
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do you write these yourself bry? they are good. an A class piece of verse lol
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Old 23-04-08, 07:47 PM
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this is excellent
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Old 26-04-08, 11:45 PM
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aaawwwwwww that was lovely , what i could read of it , to many pints i fink at the mo will try to raed it again tommoroews hun
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Old 26-04-08, 11:56 PM
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av had another bash at it and yep it loveerly ohh man i ent never drinkin pints again lol x
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Old 18-05-08, 08:36 PM
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very lovely. very deep. So much insight to the soul and fear. Please do post some more!
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