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Old 12-07-08, 04:36 PM
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Default Night, stars, guitar strum

Quietly, the guitar strum
made the night burn with wine.
Stars twinkle on the glasses
with summer and scarlet dreams.
And clink of crystal and whisper.
My eyes glow because of you.
Under the tender groan of a guitar
I undress you slowly with my palm.
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Old 31-10-08, 04:59 AM
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starlite x is on a distinguished road
Thumbs up 2nd verse.....maybe?

The warmth of your hand as you undress me
Fills me with love as well as with fear
Your mouth on mine so tender
Makes me thank god im a bottle of beer.
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