DOCTOR WHO "THE PIT OF DOOM" A New Story (Not Seen On TV)

Michael Clifton · #1 (**permalink**) 19-11-08, 06:00 PM

EXT. SPACE - DAY

NARRATOR: This is the place that is said a blue
planet that sustains life from a source called
the Sun that's 66 million light years from each
other now what's there is only a sea of space.
They lived a race of intelligent begins called
humans they call the blue planet, Earth.

DOCTOR WHO - THE PIT OF DOOM

EXT. SPACE - DAY

An Intergalactic Liner. Tour of a sea of space of where Earth once hanged.

LEADER OF THE KLANG: Welcome ladies and
gentlemen here is where planet Earth use to be.
Born 4 million years ago created by God what's
left of it is it's ruins. We intend not to make the
same mistake humans did on Earth. It's just a
matter of keeping the enemy from reaching the
stars may only be time before the next one
strikes.

The TARDIS materialises.

INT. THE TARDIS CONSOLE ROOM - DAY

THE DOCTOR in the form of CHRISTOPHER ECCLESTON and assistant ROSE he turns on Scanner.

ROSE: What are they looking
at?

THE DOCTOR: Earth.

ROSE: I can't see it.

THE DOCTOR: That's cause we've travelled
eight million years into the future when
it no longer exists.

ROSE: De ja' vu.

THE DOCTOR: I often get that feeling too.

EXT. SPACE - DAY

Out of the ashes a 6ft man appears from the ruins.

EARTH AGENT: It's coming when the wheel
turns full circle the sign will begin again.

TOURIST: That can't be true.

LEADER OF THE KLANG: He's on something.

TOURIST: Looks dogy.

LEADER OF THE KLANG: How did you know that?

TOURIST: Sometimes you just know.

INT. THE TARDIS CONSOLE ROOM - DAY

Rose and the Doctor playing fantasy game with the latest Comptuter technology.

EXT. SPACE - DAY

The Intergalactic Liner begins to warp drive.

INT. THE TARDIS CONSOLE ROOM - DAY

The Doctor feels a strong force from within.

EXT. SPACE - DAY

The TARDIS gets sucked in with the Intergalactic Liner.

INT. THE TARDIS CONSOLE ROOM - DAY

The Doctor panicks and Rose holds on tight to the Console.

THE DOCTOR: Hold on tight.

ROSE: Sure am Doctor.

THE DOCTOR: Something is pulling
us in with it.

ROSE: What?

THE DOCTOR: I've no idea what
ever it is we're about to find out.

EXT. SPACE - DAY

A whirling storm blows in from the pit.

INT. INTERGALACTIC LINER - DAY

The Leader of the Klang reveals all and putting the Tourist and the Doctor and Rose under his control.

LEADER OF THE KLANG: That's right
folks I'm not here for a Tourist
Holiday. Ladies and Gentlemen
I'm your appointment for Dr Doom.

The Leader of the Klang unmasks his true identity.

That of an Area 51 Employee a Nasa Scientist is really a Reptilian.

AREA 51 AGENT NASA SCIENTIST: Prepare for your doom.

BLACK OUT

The TARDIS materialises just in the nick of time.

The Doctor and Rose peer round from the TARDIS entrance doors.

THE DOCTOR: Hi. I'm the Doctor and this is.

ROSE: Rose.

AREA 51 AGENT NASA SCIENTIST: We don't need a Dr thanks
not right now.

THE DOCTOR: Funny.

AREA 51 AGENT NASA SCIENTIST: That wasn't meant to be
a Joke.

THE DOCTOR: Why are we on our way to doom? Is it a Holiday?

AREA 51 AGENT NASA SCIENTIST: No. Your future's end.

THE DOCTOR: You mean it's the end of the universe.

AREA 51 AGENT NASA SCIENTIST: Precisly that Doctor.

THE DOCTOR: Do you have a license for that?

AREA 51 AGENT NASA SCIENTIST: This is no time for Jokes.

THE DOCTOR: If you destroy the universe then there's not
gonna be much left of it for you to be the ruler of.

AREA 51 AGENT NASA SCIENTIST: That's where your wrong Doctor.

THE DOCTOR: We shall see about that.

AREA 51 AGENT NASA SCIENTIST: Nothing won't stop me now.

ROSE: Look, Doctor.

THE DOCTOR: Oh no he wants the higher power of the universe.

ROSE: Why?

THE DOCTOR: Have that and you'll have whole control over everything.

ROSE: Shit.

THE DOCTOR: As a Timelord and protector and defender of the laws of
time I must stop him at all costs.

ROSE: Good luck.

THE DOCTOR: Thanks I'm gonna need it.

INT. THE TARDIS CONSOLE ROOM - DAY

The Doctor runs back inside the Console Room presses the take off button.

INT. INTERGALACTIC LINER - DAY

The TARDIS dematerialises.

EXT. SPACE - DAY

The Area 51 Agent Nasa Scientist stops at a local energy supplier.

The TARDIS re-materialises at the same place same time.

As the Area 51 Agent Nasa Scientist prepares for his moment of glory the power begins to rise
around him. He straightens himself taking the final breathe of his present state of condition
with a grinn that would make your hair curl sees the TARDIS and the Doctor and just as the
Area 51 Agent Nasa Scientist gets on board the incredible energy in all it's mighty the Doctor
clings on to a rope above lands on him knocking him down to the ground out cold. The energy
desolves.

INT. INTERGALACTIC LINER - DAY

Back on the Intergalactic Liner Rose put the remains of the Earth in a fertiliser shoot ejecting
it into space.

EXT. SPACE - DAY

The Earth was back.

INT. INTERGALACTIC LINE - DAY

The Tourists and the Doctor clapping in celebration of purifying.

The TARDIS dematerialises.

INT. THE TARDIS CONSOLE ROOM - DAY

THE DOCTOR: You wanted that to happen.

ROSE: Who told you that?

THE DOCTOR: Sometimes I just know.

The Doctor sets the co-ordinates on the Console for goodness knows where next.

EXT. SPACE - DAY

The Tourists gathered round the Earth worshipping the hollow gram Earth.

The TARDIS leaves flying on course for another destination.

BLACK OUT

THE END

sexygirl222 · #2 (**permalink**) 19-11-08, 06:10 PM

i dont get what u r putting

Michael Clifton · #3 (**permalink**) 19-11-08, 09:17 PM

(Quote) I don't get what u r putting (Unquote)

Doctor Who "The Pit Of Doom"
is a Script just my own story cause I'm a Doctor Who fan.

pete8242 · #4 (**permalink**) 19-11-08, 10:07 PM

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Originally Posted by Michael Clifton

(Quote) I don't get what u r putting (Unquote)

Doctor Who "The Pit Of Doom"
is a Script just my own story cause I'm a Doctor Who fan.

who doesnt love doctor who?
im sad that another ones leaving
but donna was shit
lets hope she fooks off too

Michael Clifton · #5 (**permalink**) 20-11-08, 12:45 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pete8242

who doesnt love doctor who?
im sad that another ones leaving
but donna was shit
lets hope she fooks off too

Katherin Tate as Donna Nobel gore hope some Dalek comes along and exterminates Donna. Martha Jones was just as bad Rose is much better.
I like Ace from Sylvester McCoy era in 1987-1989 my favourite Doctor is Sylvester McCoy I grew up with him the most.
I saw Tom Baker last season till I found my self in Hospital for 2 years in a life or death situation.

PS

You've forgot to put a postravy in between doesnt it should spelt like this doesn't.

Bakerboo · #6 (**permalink**) 20-11-08, 01:18 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Michael Clifton

Katherin Tate as Donna Nobel gore hope some Dalek comes along and exterminates Donna. Martha Jones was just as bad Rose is much better.
I like Ace from Sylvester McCoy era in 1987-1989 my favourite Doctor is Sylvester McCoy I grew up with him the most.
I saw Tom Baker last season till I found my self in Hospital for 2 years in a life or death situation.

PS

You've forgot to put a postravy in between doesnt it should spelt like this doesn't.

if you're going to be pedantic enough to correct other people's punctuation, you should at least know how to spell the word you're trying to say - it's apostrophe, not "a prostravy"!

Michael Clifton · #7 (**permalink**) 29-11-08, 12:08 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bakerboo

if you're going to be pedantic enough to correct other people's punctuation, you should at least know how to spell the word you're trying to say - it's apostrophe, not "a prostravy"!

Whatever.

Catastrophe.